Reading these serious men that are younger than the rest of the older bowlers makes me laugh with gusto, also its candle pin why are they so serious? From reading that detail among the many others, I realized yes I am one o those serious bowlers also, but I play with the big pins though when I do play. Also I like the detail of those when getting louder while the night comes near, because that reminds me of myself with my group of friends.
Among the description of the kinds of people there, I like how she notices her surroundings as well, like how the rug is dirty, but she analyzes the ally and comes to a conclusion that from many years of kids parties, rock-n-bowl, etc. that's what probably did it. Also she describes how the ally is brightly lit, but it still gives off a dark deco'r I thought that was definitely spot on according to the allies I've been too. Mostly, the allies I'v been to are mostly consisting of the likes of Wonder bowl because that's the only bowling ally in Dartmouth. Every memory I have of bowling is at that place. Being taught by my dad not to get angry and respect the game, playing with my big brother and thinking of how "cool" he was, and hanging out with my friends. I guess a bowling ally can be a memory for most.
http://www.wonderbowl.com/
What I really liked about this essay is that I could relate to it and it was thoroughly detailed and I felt like i could visualize each part at a time. Lastly I liked at the end how she said what she knows, but also what she wants to find out next as well.
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